A possible concise summary is:
The speaker and his friend David are playing a Roblox game called Break Store Pro, where they have to survive the attacks of a villain named Scary Larry and his henchmen, who are destroying the maps. They also have to make a soda pie for a guy outside their house, but they fail to do so. They manage to get the code for the safe in the basement and escape to Scary Larry's house, where they plant a bomb and destroy everything. They celebrate their victory and wait for the sequel of the game.
Some possible key facts extracted from the text are:
1. The text is a transcript of a video game commentary on Roblox in the Break Store Pro map.
2. The commentator and his friend David are trying to make a pie for a guy outside and escape from the map breakers and their leader, Scary Larry.
3. The commentator and David have to collect items, fight enemies, hide from Scary Larry, and find codes to unlock the basement and the safe.
4. The commentator makes a mistake by making a soda pie instead of an apple pie for the guy outside.
5. The commentator and David manage to destroy Scary Larry's house with a bomb and escape from the map.
6. The text ends with a thank you message and a hint of a sequel or a new story.